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Somewhere in the world, there is a man who's allowed to kiss you.
Somewhere in the world, there is a man who's allowed to love you.
And somewhere in the world, someone dreams of you at night.
And beautiful poems of you they do hopelessly indite.

Somewhere in the world, there are those who're allowed to know you.
Somewhere in the world, there are those who're allowed to love you.
And somewhere in the world, someone awaits one moment.
And that moment is when you make, from heaven, your descent.

They know not what it is they will say.
Though I am sure they shall rehearse
Every last word in every last way
Of that quaintly indited little verse.

Their dreams allow them to love you.
In that world you love them also,
Because in dreams that's what you do,
Everyone's part of your puppet show.

The world is perfect.
Or so it would seem.
For someone to see you
It would take a dream.

To them, you are everything.
And yet, you are nothing.

To me, you are everything.
And yet, you are nothing.
Dated 20 NOV 2002.
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sionofangels Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2006  Professional Photographer
almost 2 years later...this poem still resounds in me, and makes me cry. thank you so much for this poem. truly beautiful.

scot.
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slowlyslippingaway Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
Thats so sweet...better than any attempt of mine at love poetry...:clap:
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ActrizAnna Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
oh my...beautiful beautiful work...this is truly great poetry

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moot101 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004   Writer
wow, thats so romantic....I like this
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p1rate Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
nice one dude...!
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sionofangels Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004  Professional Photographer
Oh my god...that got me to the point of tears. I am going through a very romantically challenging point in my life and your poem made it all that much better. Thank you for this gift to the poetry world. I hope everyone sees this poem and feels the same things I felt. This totally deserves a daily deviation

~Scion
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chick-wit-paint Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
that maykes me sooooo uplifted! seeriously, i thot it was realli gud, i was tryin to think uf 1 person dat might feel dat way about me. i cant think of no one!!!!!
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